The obesity rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many developed countries. discuss some possible reasons for this problem and suggest solutions

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rates among teenagers

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increased dramatically in many developed countries

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growing rapidly around the globe for the time being.

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is a worrying trend, since it results in

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from many diseases. From my perspective, the most detrimental outcomes of

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problem are obese teens may experience low self-esteem, depression, anxiety, and body image issues, which can negatively impact their

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well-being

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obesity

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during adolescence is associated with a higher risk of premature death

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an increased likelihood of developing chronic diseases at a younger age and limit sugary drinks, fast food and processed snack

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aim for at least 60 minutes of moderate to vigorous physical activity each day can be considered as viable solutions to it. One of the most widespread and significant effects of

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problem is obese teenagers can face discrimination and violence, which can lead to feelings of isolation and exacerbate mental health problems. In order to resolve

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issue I deem that its root causes should be first addressed. Perhaps the most effective method of doing

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teens to eat a balanced diet rich in fruits, vegetables, whole grains, and lean proteins. By way of conclusion, I reckon that

obesity

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rates among teenagers have increased dramatically triggering

obesity

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limits the physical capabilities of adolescents, makes it difficult for them to participate in sports or physical activities, leads to a sedentary lifestyle and reduced quality of life

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clearly a problem of

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complexity that no solutions

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likely in the short term.

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, I believe that

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sugary drinks, fast food and processed snacks and

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for at least 60 minutes of moderate to vigorous physical activity each day would constitute a very good first step. Charos