The chart below gives information about the cultural changes among people in Germany and the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart is about the cultural difference between
Germany
and United
Correct article usage
the United
Kingdom
. As we can see, there are different aspect
of comparison.
There is only one aspect where two countries are similar and Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
that is
"Power Distance." Here, both the countries are about 35%. United
Correct article usage
The United
Kingdom
is more
ahead Rephrase
far
than
Change preposition
of
Germany
in industrialism reaching almost 90%. Similarly
, United
Correct article usage
the United
Kingdom
is the winner in indulgence as well. On the other hand
, Germany
is nearly double in the uncertainty avoidance aspect reaching nearly 65%. Additionally
, in pragmatism also
Germany
defeats
Wrong verb form
defeated
United
Correct article usage
the United
Kingdom
by nearly 35%.Submitted by roshnijuneja19182 on
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