The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the data on the proportion of
people
in
United
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Kingdom giving money to charity between 1990 and 2010
Overall
, it can be seen that
people
in 36-50 give money to charity
higest
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highest
on the chart approximately
by
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42
percent
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in 1999 and the less were
people
in 18-25 years
percent
of
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just under 10.
In addition
, in 1990 18-25 were around 17
percent
and
fallen
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significantly in 2010 to 7
percent
.
Then
28-35
donate
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donated
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in 1990 and 2010 get a downward trend has
percent
32, 24 respectively and
adlut
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adult
people
(36-50)
reach
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the
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peak in 1990
over
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at over
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40
percent
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while
2010
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in 2010
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decreased to 24
percent
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per cent
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.
Moreover
, old
people
(51-65) started in 1990 giving money to charity 35
percent
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per cent
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and
grow
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grew
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up
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by
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almost 40
percent
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per cent
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.
finally
, over 65 years was lower at 33
percent
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in 1990, but it
was little go
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was little going
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up to 35
percent
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per cent
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in 2010.
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