The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the data on the proportion of
people
in United
Kingdom giving money to charity between 1990 and 2010
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, it can be seen that people
in 36-50 give money to charity higest
on the chart approximately Correct your spelling
highest
by
42 Change preposition
apply
percent
in 1999 and the less were Change the spelling
per cent
people
in 18-25 years percent
of donate
just under 10.
Wrong verb form
donated
In addition
, in 1990 18-25 were around 17 percent
and fallen
significantly in 2010 to 7 Wrong verb form
fell
percent
. Then
28-35 donate
in 1990 and 2010 get a downward trend has Change the form of the verb
donated
percent
32, 24 respectively and adlut
Correct your spelling
adult
people
(36-50) reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak in 1990 Correct article usage
a
over
40 Change preposition
at over
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
while
2010
decreased to 24 Change preposition
in 2010
percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
, old people
(51-65) started in 1990 giving money to charity 35 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
grow
Wrong verb form
grew
up
almost 40 Change preposition
by
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
finally
, over 65 years was lower at 33 percent
in 1990, but it Change the spelling
per cent
was little go
up to 35 Change the verb form
was little going
percent
in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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