The graphs below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graphs
illustrates
the figure of Change the verb form
illustrate
shops
that opened and closed in one nation from 2011 to 2018.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that opened fell down Use synonyms
a
quite Correct article usage
apply
significant
over the period of 2011 to 2018. Change the word
significantly
Whereas
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed had a Use synonyms
fluctuate
trend and Change the verb form
fluctuating
finally
finish at around 5000.
On the one hand, there were a huge Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
shops
that clin 2011 Use synonyms
that is
around at 8500. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
number
had a Use synonyms
fluctuate
trend between 2011 and 2014. In the end, it progressively decreased to 3000 in 2018.
Change the verb form
fluctuating
On the other hand
, at around 6400, the total closed Linking Words
shops
were accounted Use synonyms
in
2011. Change preposition
for in
Then
, the Linking Words
number
had a massive fluctuation and reached roughly Use synonyms
at
500 in 2015. Change preposition
apply
However
, it Linking Words
bounce
back and recorded at around 5000. After that, it Wrong verb form
bounced
leveled
off and in the end Change the spelling
levelled
finish
with slightly above 5000.Wrong verb form
finished
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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