The graphs show the monthly expenditure of an average household in Australia and France.

The graphs show the monthly expenditure of an average household in Australia and France.
The pie graphs illustrate information concerning a household's average spending per month in
Australia
and
France
. As clearly seen from the pie graph, the highest expenditures were education at 30% in
Australia
and clothing at 32% in
France
. The education expenditure in
France
was only a third of the
figure
in
Australia
,
while
the clothing spending in
Australia
was just under a fifth of the
figure
in
France
. On recreation, Australians spent an average of 27%,
whereas
French spent just under a
third,
the
figure
in
Australia
at 8%. In terms of restaurants, the
figure
in
France
was 6% and just over tripled the
figure
in
Australia
.
In particular
, the expenditures on furnishings and medical care in the two countries had the same figures at 10% and 8%, respectively. When it comes to transport expenditures, there were less than 10% in the two countries. French households spent 19% on footwear,
while
Australians spent only 2% on it.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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