The graphs show the monthly expenditure of an average household in Australia and France.
The pie graphs illustrate information concerning a household's average spending per month in
Australia
and France
.
As clearly seen from the pie graph, the highest expenditures were education at 30% in Australia
and clothing at 32% in France
. The education expenditure in France
was only a third of the figure
in Australia
, while
the clothing spending in Australia
was just under a fifth of the figure
in France
. On recreation, Australians spent an average of 27%, whereas
French spent just under a third,
the figure
in Australia
at 8%.
In terms of restaurants, the figure
in France
was 6% and just over tripled the figure
in Australia
. In particular
, the expenditures on furnishings and medical care in the two countries had the same figures at 10% and 8%, respectively. When it comes to transport expenditures, there were less than 10% in the two countries. French households spent 19% on footwear, while
Australians spent only 2% on it.Submitted by bestabis on
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