The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The maps show a village named Ryemouth that has undergone certain changes from 1995 to
present
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. The village has become more residential by the construction of apartments and houses. The natural places have been turned into
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leisure
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and a
place
at the beach has been converted into a different structure.
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both sides of the road have been removed and the shops converted into restaurants and the markets for fishing purposes have been replaced by 4 apartments. The fishing port has been knocked down from the sea and the sea side left without any new constructions. The hotel at the corner has a new parking
place
for vehicles now. About the natural areas, the farming area and the forest have been turned into a
place
for sports, tennis and golf. Two new houses have been built near the road and the old 4-residential area extended by 2 new buildings.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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