The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration below displays how the
sugar
is manufactured from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, there are 7 stages in the diagram, commencing with cultivating Linking Words
sugar
cane, crops harvested, and finishing with Use synonyms
sugar
dried and cooled in the process.
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sugar
canes Use synonyms
initially
need 12 to 18 months to become mature. Once the plants have grown sufficiently, some are harvested by farmers, others by machines. In the next state, Linking Words
sugar
is placed in a machine which crushes the Use synonyms
sugar
canes to separate the juice from the stems. After being crushed, the remaining juice undergoes purification using a limestone filter to remove impurities.
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Next,
the purifying juice is heated in a large pot, accelerating the evaporation process to make it become syrup. Following Linking Words
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another separating stage where syrup is removed and Linking Words
sugar
crystals are extracted by the centrifuge. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
sugar
is dried and cooled in the big container.Use synonyms
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