The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The flow chart illustrates the development of a
salmon
from an egg during its life cycle.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 3 distinct stages illustrated in the process, commencing with producing
salmon
eggs in the water and ending with the development of a mature
salmon
. The first
stage
is when the eggs, shown as small stones under the reeds, float slowly on the upper river. It takes approximately 5-6 months for the
salmon
to become a fry. At
this
point in the cycle, a fry which is about 3-5 centimetres long fast on the lower river. The next
stage
after
this
is the emergence of a smolt, which takes about 4 years from a fry. In
this
stage
, a smolt is 12-15 centimetres long. After that, a smolt reaches to open sea for approximately 5 years
,
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and eventually becomes an adult
salmon
. At
this
stage
, it is 70-75 centimetres long. The final
stage
of the cycle is when an adult
salmon
finds a mate in order to lay eggs. Having completed all these steps, the lifecycle will
then
begin again.
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