The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#expenditure #three #categories #age #groups #residents #uk #summaries #information #features #comparisons
The bar chart illustrates the money
spendings
on three Replace the word
spent
consumption
categories including food and drinks, restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
and entertainment by various Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
age
categories citizens of the UK in 2004. Overall
, the highest food and drink consumption
is allocated for
the two groups of people who are over 61 years old. The budget expenditure on Change preposition
to
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
is allocated for the other three groups nearly Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
same
.
A more detailed look at the graph shows that the Correct article usage
the same
age
group 61-75 spend the most money for
entertainment activities which is Change preposition
on
exectly
20 Correct your spelling
exactly
percent
of total Change the spelling
per cent
spendings
, Fix the agreement mistake
spending
conversely
, they spend the least budget for
Change preposition
on
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
at just only 2 Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
percent
of their total budget. Change the spelling
per cent
This
spending is over ten times less than consumption
of people who are under 30.
The middle Correct article usage
the consumption
age
group of people (31-45)'s spendinds
on three Correct your spelling
spending
spendings
consumption
categories are nearly same
between around 8-13 Correct article usage
the same
percent
. In terms of Change the spelling
per cent
the
food and drink, Correct article usage
apply
under
30 residents allocate for it 14 Correct pronoun usage
those under
percent
of total Change the spelling
per cent
spendinds
which is the highest percentage compared to other Correct your spelling
spending
spendings
age
groups.Submitted by zulzayanyamkhu on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, age, percent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!