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The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the money
spendings
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spent
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 on three
consumption
 categories including food and drinks,
restaurant
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restaurants
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 and
hotel
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hotels
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 and entertainment by various
age
 categories citizens of the UK in 2004.
Overall
, the highest food and drink
consumption
 is allocated
for
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to
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 the two groups of people who are over 61 years old. The budget expenditure on
restaurant
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restaurants
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 and
hotel
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hotels
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 is allocated for the other three groups nearly
same
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the same
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. A more detailed look at the graph shows that the
age
 group 61-75 spend the most money
for
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on
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 entertainment activities which is
exectly
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exactly
 20
percent
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per cent
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 of total
spendings
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spending
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,
conversely
, they spend the least budget
for
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on
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restaurant
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restaurants
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 and
hotel
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hotels
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 at just only 2
percent
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per cent
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 of their total budget.
This
 spending is over ten times less than
consumption
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the consumption
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 of people who are under 30. The middle
age
 group of people (31-45)'s
spendinds
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spending
spendings
 on three
consumption
 categories are nearly
same
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the same
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 between around 8-13
percent
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per cent
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. In terms of
the
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apply
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food and drink,
under
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those under
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 30 residents allocate for it 14
percent
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per cent
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 of total
spendinds
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spending
spendings
 which is the highest percentage compared to other
age
 groups.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, age, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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