Some university offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development
There is no doubt that
after
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have
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has
effected
the globe in many ways of learning and methods of delivery in many institutions namely online courses . Correct your spelling
affected
However
, I believe that there is
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are
both
positive and negative developments of this
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.
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To begin
with ,one of the benefits of this
is the flexibilty
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flexibility
that is
very convenient for both
tutors and students because they can choose time
and date for the courses.Correct article usage
the time
For instance
,a single mother who is hardly to leave their house can easily join online classes to learn cooking sessions. Besides
that ,online courses are more cheaper than in person
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in-person
For example
,students with limited financial support wanted
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further
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lectures
cost-effectiveness
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In contrast
,the demerits
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demerit
this
development is the lack of face to face
interaction between two Add a hyphen
face-to-face
person
.It is important for students and Fix the agreement mistake
people
the
institutions to have effective learning outcomes and real materials to deliver a better learning process.Correct article usage
apply
For example
,there is
always some barriers Correct subject-verb agreement
are
such
as technology problems that will affect the learning and teaching process.Consenquently
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Consequently
both
party
will suffer the Fix the agreement mistake
parties
lost
in time and money .Replace the word
loss
In addition
,if this
alternative delivery ways of learning continue to approach Correct determiner usage
these
then
this
will slowly have an impacts
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impact
profession
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professionals
such
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teachers
For instance
, only one tutor needed
to teach an online class compared to physical classes need more Add a missing verb
is needed
then
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on
the
campus.
In conclusion , I think Correct article usage
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this
development have
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has
both
good and bad results.Although
,considering the time and money saving but also
effects
social interaction between the teacher and the disciple.Correct your spelling
affects
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Ensure all your ideas are fully developed and directly related to the question asked. In some cases, you presented ideas without full elaboration, such as how online learning directly impacts teachers' professions. Providing specific reasons or examples can help clarify your points.
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
