The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The bar chart below illustrates what is the proportion of four different
countries
( Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia
) from 1970 to 2020, with prediction
from the next two decades. Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
Overall
, as can be seen in the line chart, all four countries
, until 2040, follow an upward trend.
In 1970, Thailand and Indonesia
were the only two countries
with the
percentage of the population under 20 per Correct article usage
a
cent
, where
in 2020, Thailand had increased to 10 per Correct word choice
whereas
cent
, and Indonesia
almost tripled the number of people, reaching 50 per cent
.
Meanwhile, at the beginning of the period, the Philippines and Malaysia,
started at approximately 30 per Remove the comma
apply
cent
, and after the
two decades slightly less than 50 per Correct article usage
apply
cent
. For the next 20 years, the Philippines suffered a decrease, but by the end of the period, based on projection, the percentage should reach slightly over 50 per cent
.
Based on the graph, by 2040, all four countries
will have a rise, but only Indonesia
and Malaysia will reach more than 50 per cent
and respectively 80 per cent
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