Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a view that companies prioritize
to increase
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their commercial profits when advertising even if they are unnecessary to the public.
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growth in sales may seem the main target for organizations, l believe that other purpose is
also
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considered
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as raising awareness of people about newly-made
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product
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products
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or
service
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services
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. It is true that many companies often target the rise of their profit in the market with the help of advertisements. Now, technological advancements
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facilitating easy
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connections
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between
consumer
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consumers
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and
seller
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sellers
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through the provision of information which is indeed necessary.
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, people have
wider
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a wider
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range of
choice
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about products and services and consider
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the very best one.
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, the way
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businesses use advertisements via TV, billboards and newspapers can be an ideal way to increase
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sales and make
profit
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a profit
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. Despite these, l still remain convinced that the central purpose of
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promotions is not only
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productivity in their sales as other aspects
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as branding and information about new
service
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services
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& products to inform others to become highly regarded. Some companies run a business to produce a
product
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in favour of being the brand and advertise them frequently, thereby ending up
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a name of a
product
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. Another plausible reason why they promote quite often is
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them aware
about
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the information
product
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such
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as production date, ingredients, preservation period and the way how to consume it by those ads we see where it is common.
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, Coke company make a deal with many businesses and there is no place where their logos
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not been reached in the world. In conclusion,
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core
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reason
of
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advertising seems to be
a
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apply
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profit, l believe that raising awareness about products and brand promotion
are
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considered to be the main
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.

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