The line graph shows the percentage of spending in a European country from 1960 to 2000.

The line graph shows the percentage of spending in a European country from 1960 to 2000.
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The line graph illustrates how money is spent on five different things (
food
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,
leisure
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,clothing,transport,fuel/energy) measured in percentage in Europe, in an unknown country in 2005.
Overall
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, as can be seen on the graph, the most money was spent on
food
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compared to others. In 1960, the cost of
food
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was around 35 per
cent
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,
while
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the cost of
leisure
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was just under 20 per
cent
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. Moving forward to the next two decades, both of them suffered a decrease reaching 25 per
cent
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food
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and approximately 17 per
cent
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leisure
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, but
at the end
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of the period, in 2000 both of them were under 15 per
cent
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. Transport is the only one who had a gradual increase from 1960 (under 10 per
cent
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) to slightly over 15 per
cent
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in 2000, which goes over
food
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and
leisure
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,
while
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fuel and clothing did not suffer too many changes,
at the end
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of the period 2000, both of them were under 10 per
cent
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, being the lowest point on the graph.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, leisure, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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