You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want an-
other. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say:
- why you liked the course
- why you need more
- and say where and when the course should take place
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Lucy . And I have been studying a cake course recently . I really like the course. I learned plenty of sweets to make.Sometimes, I spend more time making it. To tell the truth , I want to please my parents to make sweets.
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wants
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to learn IT and the Turkish language .
Yours sincerely
Lucy
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Coherence Cohesion
Make sure to follow the letter structure more closely: 1. Introduction, where you mention the purpose of the letter; 2. A paragraph for each of the bullet points in the prompt; 3. A conclusion. This will help in improving the logical structure of your letter.
Coherence Cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, as per the prompt. For example, why you liked the current course, why you need more courses, and details of where and when the new course should take place. Try to allocate each point to a separate paragraph.
Task Achievement
It's essential to fully address all parts of the task. Ensure you clearly explain why you liked the course, why you need more (with specific reasons for each new topic you want to learn), and where and when the next course should take place.
Task Achievement
Use a more formal tone and register suitable for a letter to your manager. Phrases like "To tell the truth", and informal expressions might be replaced with more formal equivalents for consistency.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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