You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want an-
other. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say:
- why you liked the course
- why you need more
- and say where and when the course should take place
Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Lucy . And I have been studying a cake course recently . I really like the course. I learned plenty of sweets to make.Sometimes, I spend more time making it. To tell the truth , I want to please my parents to make sweets.
However
, again I
wants
Change the verb form
want
show examples
to learn IT and the Turkish language .
Yours sincerely
Lucy
Submitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Coherence Cohesion
Make sure to follow the letter structure more closely: 1. Introduction, where you mention the purpose of the letter; 2. A paragraph for each of the bullet points in the prompt; 3. A conclusion. This will help in improving the logical structure of your letter.
Coherence Cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea, as per the prompt. For example, why you liked the current course, why you need more courses, and details of where and when the new course should take place. Try to allocate each point to a separate paragraph.
Task Achievement
It's essential to fully address all parts of the task. Ensure you clearly explain why you liked the course, why you need more (with specific reasons for each new topic you want to learn), and where and when the next course should take place.
Task Achievement
Use a more formal tone and register suitable for a letter to your manager. Phrases like "To tell the truth", and informal expressions might be replaced with more formal equivalents for consistency.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
It is true that jobs around the world are shifting so quickly that it is impossible for individuals to rely on the similar work or workplace as they used to. While there are various reasons underlie this dramatic development, the public can take action to prepare for it.
Many people believe that only formal examinations can properly assess students’ knowledge and ability at universities, while other forms of assessment are unaccountable measures. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that student’s ability or learning results should only be based on formal exams.
Nowadays, quick meal consumption is rising day by day and it is known that it can lead to serious health problems. Thus, it is argued by some people that junk food should be forbidden. I partly disagree with this opinion because banning fast food would lead to other consequences and it is not the only solution.
Many countries are witnessing the phenomenon whereby museums and historical places are able to attract mostly foreign tourists, not local people. In this essay, I will explore some possible reasons for this and the solutions that will encourage the local people to visit.