The diagrams illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth.

The diagrams illustrate the stages in the life of a silkworm and the process of producing silk cloth.
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Contained in the first diagram is the information pertaining to the silkworm's life
cycle
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the second diagram illustrates the manufacture of
silk
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cloth
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. From an
overall
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perspective, the life
cycle
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commences with laying eggs to the
larva
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's development before culminating with
adult
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an adult
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moth and starting the
cycle
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again.
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, the procedure of
silk
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cloth
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begins with the material called cocoon, which is produced by silkworms, moves through the processing process
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ends with dying to obtain the final product of
silk
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cloth
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. The most logical point to start at is the moth laying eggs on the leaf. Over ten days, the eggs
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hatched into silkworm
larva
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which eats mulberry leaf for survival. For the next four to six weeks, the
larva
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then
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starts to create
silk
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thread which takes three to eight days to be finished into a cocoon in preparation for the metamorphosis stage. The
larva
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then
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stays inside the cocoon for 16 days before transforming into a matured moth and beginning the life
cycle
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again. moving on to the second diagram which reveals the
silk
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cloth
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production. In the first stage, the cocoons are carefully selected from the farm and
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boiled in water inside a large pot. After that, the cocoons are
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unwound into 300-900m threads.
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plenty of strands of thread are twisted together to form a thicker thread. At
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point of the process, the strengthened threads either be dyed or can be used to weave cloths before dyeing to obtain the final product.
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sex
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cycle, silk, cloth, larva, sex with synonyms.
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