The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the comparison of newborn
rates
in
two
countries
from 1920 to 2000. It is noticeable that the evidence of the
two
countries
fluctuated during the period 1920 until 1950.
Moreover
, the
birth
rates
in the
USA
and
China
fall over the period 1925. In 1920, the amount of born rate in the
USA
and
China
started from 11% and 10%, respectively.
Furthermore
, In 1930, the account of babies in
China
sharply skyrocketed to 15% and the
number
of babies in the
USA
reached 12.5%.
Then
, In 1935, the
birth
rates
in
two
countries
dropped to 5%. After that, the percentage of
birth
rates
in the
USA
and
China
rose which which were the highest
number
of
birth
rates
which was 20% and 15%, respectively.
Therefore
, the rate of babies in the
two
countries
declined over the period 1950 until 2000.
In addition
, the gap of
number
birth
rates
between
China
and the
USA
reached 5%.
As well as
, In 1955, The
birth
rate in
China
fell to 8% and in the
USA
declined to 13%.
Next,
the range
number
of births between
China
and the
USA
was steady from 1955 to 2000 which was 5%.
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