The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the comparison of newborn
rates
in two
countries
from 1920 to 2000.
It is noticeable that the evidence of the two
countries
fluctuated during the period 1920 until 1950. Moreover
, the birth
rates
in the USA
and China
fall over the period 1925.
In 1920, the amount of born rate in the USA
and China
started from 11% and 10%, respectively. Furthermore
, In 1930, the account of babies in China
sharply skyrocketed to 15% and the number
of babies in the USA
reached 12.5%. Then
, In 1935, the birth
rates
in two
countries
dropped to 5%. After that, the percentage of birth
rates
in the USA
and China
rose which which were the highest number
of birth
rates
which was 20% and 15%, respectively.
Therefore
, the rate of babies in the two
countries
declined over the period 1950 until 2000. In addition
, the gap of number
birth
rates
between China
and the USA
reached 5%. As well as
, In 1955, The birth
rate in China
fell to 8% and in the USA
declined to 13%. Next,
the range number
of births between China
and the USA
was steady from 1955 to 2000 which was 5%.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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