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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart below represents the number, in thousands, of males and females in tertiary study in Britain between the 1970s - 1991s era and whether they pursued it full-time or part-time.
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, the majority of both men and women completed their tertiary learning part-time rather than full-time. Men had the highest number at the start of the cycle
while
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 women had the highest
at the end
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 of the season. In 1970/71, 1000
thousand
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 males attended higher learning part-time compared to 100
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 who completed it full-time. There was a drop in the 1980/81 period with almost 850
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 men completing part-time
whereas
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 a little over 100
thousand
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 finished it full-time.
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, a slight increase was shown in 1990/91 with just above 900
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 males taking part-time and over 200
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 full-timers. Females had a slow start with under 800
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 finishing higher learning part-time as compared to the 50
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 full-time in 1970/71. From 1980/81, there was a steady increase of 800
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 women doing part-time and 200
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 full-time. The 1990/91 had a spike increase of females in tertiary training almost close to 1200
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 part-time and 200
thousand
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 full-time.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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