The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in

Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below represents the number, in thousands, of males and females in tertiary study in Britain between the 1970s - 1991s era and whether they pursued it full-time or part-time.
Overall
, the majority of both men and women completed their tertiary learning part-time rather than full-time. Men had the highest number at the start of the cycle
while
women had the highest
at the end
of the season. In 1970/71, 1000
thousand
males attended higher learning part-time compared to 100
thousand
who completed it full-time. There was a drop in the 1980/81 period with almost 850
thousand
men completing part-time
whereas
a little over 100
thousand
finished it full-time.
Then
, a slight increase was shown in 1990/91 with just above 900
thousand
males taking part-time and over 200
thousand
full-timers. Females had a slow start with under 800
thousand
finishing higher learning part-time as compared to the 50
thousand
full-time in 1970/71. From 1980/81, there was a steady increase of 800
thousand
women doing part-time and 200
thousand
full-time. The 1990/91 had a spike increase of females in tertiary training almost close to 1200
thousand
part-time and 200
thousand
full-time.
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