The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.
The provided pie chart illustrates UAE government funding of different sectors in the year 2000. The numbers are shown in billions
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and divided across 10 sectors.
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we can see that a major fraction of the budget goes to social security at a soaring 100
billion
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whereas
the smallest portion is spent on transport standing at only 9
billion
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second to
last
at just 13
billion
AED.
On the other hand
, the second biggest budget is devoted to health and personal social services at a sum of 53
billion
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billion
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2000. As the diagram suggests, a similar amount of money is spent on Defence, Debt interest and other
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at around 23
billion
AED.
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