The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart reveals information about
annual
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the annual
payment
comparison between doctors
and other workers
in seven nations in 2004.
Overall
, it is clear that
the US was the Also
, it is notable that France and Switzerland
had same
level of Change the article
the same
payment
for doctors
,however
, the
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apply
Switzerland
's payment
for other workers
was more
greater. Change the word
apply
In
contrast
came four developed countries except Finland others had Add a comma
contrast,
same
number of Change the article
a same
the same
payment
for Fix the agreement mistake
payments
doctors
and other workers
.
Starting with the US doctors
' payment
consisted sharply Fix the agreement mistake
payments
120
thousand Change preposition
of 120
of
US dollars, Change preposition
apply
while
other workers
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workers'
worker's
profit
was three times less than Fix the agreement mistake
profits
doctors
about 40 thousand dollars. Although
workers
gain was less come zero, was the greatest Change noun form
worker's
workers'
between
countries in 2004. As for Change preposition
among
Switzerland
and France doctors
' and will payment
amounted Fix the agreement mistake
payments
of
about 70,000 dollars, and annual pay for other Change preposition
to
workers
in Switzerland
illustrated $10,000 more than in France.
As regards, Italy, Czech
Republic and Germany annual pay for other Correct article usage
the Czech
workers
were
at the same level and the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
doctors
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doctor's
doctors'
payment
had little difference. The Czech Republic and Germany accounted with
above $60,000, Change preposition
for
while
Italy had a sharp one. The
Finland's annual pay was the lowest Correct article usage
apply
with
$50,000, Change preposition
at
however
, the other workers
gain was the highest Change noun form
workers'
worker's
between
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among
three
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above mention
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