The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the number of individual expenditures in Europe native
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spent on different products and services in the Change the verb form
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of 50 years from 1958 to 2008.
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Luxury goods contributed the least to the expenditure pattern of people’s demand and Clothing was the most significant consumer demand. In comparison, Use synonyms
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Housing became the largest number of resident’s spending on commodities and the lowest contribution was made by Travel/transport.
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in question, Luxury goods and Food accounted for 7% and 8% respectively of people’s demand in 1958, experienced a more than doubled and shared a similar percentage of 17%. Use synonyms
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, Travel/transport and entertainment were 13% and 18% respectively in the year of 1958 and witnessed a slight decrease of 6% and 16% in 2008.
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Clothing made up 32% before declining considerably to only 12% in 2008. Change preposition
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housing made up 45% of Europe spendingLinking Words
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and reached the highest point of 32%, which comprised almost a third of total commodities in 2008.Remove the comma
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