The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the changes in the birth aspects of
China
and the Use synonyms
USA
between 1920 and 2000.
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Overall
, in Linking Words
this
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we can that Add a comma
graph,
China
extremely decreased than the Use synonyms
USA
. Use synonyms
China
got their top mark and extremely decreased, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
USA
rapidly decreased.
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for
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at
China
they started with Use synonyms
10
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a 10
score
in 1920 and in 1950 got their top mark after started extremely decreased for Change to a plural noun
scores
the
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apply
from
1950 and 2000 with 2,5 scores.
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between
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, the Linking Words
USA
had better scores than Use synonyms
China
. It is Use synonyms
showed
at the start Wrong verb form
shown
in
1920. After that Change preposition
of
Correct pronoun usage
it decresed
decresed
to 1945 and extremely Correct your spelling
decreased
incresed
to 1950 with the highest 15 scores. Correct your spelling
increased
In addition
, the Linking Words
USA
startedUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
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