You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Dear Ann
I hope you are keeping well. I want to invite you to my new home
I have
a good news
Remove the article
good news
a piece of good news
i
recently Change the capitalization
I
mowed
Correct your spelling
moved
to
a new houseChange preposition
into
wich
much better and bigger than my previous Correct your spelling
which
hous
Correct your spelling
house
this
hous
Correct your spelling
house
in
London. Add a missing verb
is in
This
hous
has six rooms and two bathrooms and even has a big swimming pool and Correct your spelling
house
own
garden there are so many Correct pronoun usage
its own
beatiful
flowers. To the Correct your spelling
beautiful
point
he is in the middle of London. the neighbours Add a comma
point,
so
friendly here
I would pleased if you Add a missing verb
are so
join
me next weekend You can explore my new home, Wrong verb form
joined
additionally
we can spend time here.
Your Add a comma
additionally,
fairthfully
AminaCorrect your spelling
faithfully
faithful
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Spelling
Spell words correctly to enhance understanding and professionalism. For example, 'moved' instead of 'mowed', 'house' instead of 'hous'.
Grammar
Use proper capitalization for places like 'London' and pronouns like 'I' to maintain formal writing standards.
Coherence
Ensure your ideas flow logically by using connectors or transitional phrases between your sentences. This helps create a cohesive narrative. For example, 'In addition to its size, the house has a beautiful garden with...' instead of abruptly mentioning the garden.
Detail
Provide a more detailed description of the neighbourhood to fully address the letter's requirements. Mention specific features or why you find it welcoming.
Grammar
Use complete sentences and check for grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage.
Formality
Sign the letter with a more commonly accepted closing, like 'Yours sincerely' if you know the person well, for consistency in formal letters.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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