The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. EXTRACTION OF AVOCADO OIL

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the different

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stages of making avocado

oil

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.

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, there are 9 stages, beginning with softening the

fruit

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before washing

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being crushed and blended where it is split to collect the

oil

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, being filled, bottling and ready for contribution. The initial stage focuses on the

fruit

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being collected and soft in order to remove the rotten ones and keep the good quality

fruit

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. After that, it is washed

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goes through the crusher and blender so as to remove seeds and skins, ready to pass 2 stages of splitting. Splitting to receive the

oil

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is the purpose of the later stage. As the mixture

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to the centrifuge stage in the range of 45 and 50C, it was split to separate the solids and liquids

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separate the

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and water. Simultaneously, the solid waste

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seeds, skins and rotten

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will be transported to the orchard

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helps the plant grow faster

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the wastewater

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removed.

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, the

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comes across the filter and is clarified before being bottled and ready for distribution.