The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
The given graph compares the statistics of
birth
and death in New Zealand during a period from 1901 to 2101.
It is clear that
at the beginning the birth
rates witnessed a fluctuating by 1941, then
it began plummeting. Therefore
, this
indicator reached a peak of almost 65 people in 1961. There was a steady decline in the number of births and then
followed a little fluctuating
until 2020. Replace the word
fluctuation
Further
, it is expected to be leveled
off in future of New Zealand.
Change the spelling
levelled
On the contrary
, the number of deaths experienced a gradual rise by approximately 2021. So, this
year saw a
highest index of death. Despite Change the article
the
this
, it is going to reach a peak in 2061 after a significant jump. And next
forty-year period it should level off Correct article usage
the next
as well as
birth
rates. Hence
, comparing the begging
number to the ending, it has changed substantially.
Correct your spelling
beginning
To sum up
, over the 200-year period between from
1901 to 2101 the Change preposition
apply
birth
rates prevailed for almost all the time above death indicators and they are expected to fall after 2041.Submitted by wegeeetz on
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