Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Other say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Disucss both these view and give your own opinions.
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that technology can Wrong verb form
believe
gives
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give
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the oppurtunity
oppurtunity
to humans to enjoy watching Correct your spelling
opportunity
movies
at home while
other
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others
argued
that Wrong verb form
argue
cinema
makes films more authentic and interesting. In my point of view is
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mobile
phones, Correct word choice
though mobile
tablet
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tablets
computer
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the easist
easist
and cheapest way to be entertained by films, there are still undeniably reasons to engage with cinemas which will be discussed in Correct your spelling
easiest
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essay.
On the one hand, viewers, especially Correct article usage
the young
young
generation prefer to watch Correct article usage
the young
movies
by phone or tablet because this
technological development allows them to do it anywhere and anytime. That means people are able to save their
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time
for
commuting to the movie theatre and Change preposition
by
watch
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watching
movies
their
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in their
time
or split
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splitting
begin
now and Wrong verb form
beginning
finish
later. Another good point of using digital devices is Wrong verb form
finishing
convinient
and flexibility because Correct your spelling
convenience
cinema
is so crowded and noisy Correct article usage
the cinema
besides
snacks are really expensive.
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and
On the other hand
, there is nothing to replace the cinematic experience of watching a film in a theater
with a large screen, immersive sound system, and a collective audience Change the spelling
theatre
can
enhance the Correct pronoun usage
that can
overall
enjoyment and impact of the movie. Moreover
, 3D and other versions are the
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some
one
of the best Correct pronoun usage
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feeling
which people should try at least Change to a plural noun
feelings
one
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once
time
in their lifetime. In my opinion, going to cinema
is another way to hang out with friends or date Add an article
the cinema
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somebody who Change preposition
apply
ones
wants to spend their precious Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
together such
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on birthday
birthday
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birthdays
anniversary
because watching Fix the agreement mistake
anniversaries
movies
by phone or tablet has not exiciting
emotions or Correct your spelling
exciting
not
considered Add a missing verb
is not
as
a special occasion.
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conclude
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i
could say that both ways of watching Change the capitalization
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movies
have their merits. It ultimately depends on personal preferences and the type of movie being watched. For big blockbusters or visually stunning films, the cinema
can provide a more immersive experience. However
, for more intimate or casual viewing, watching on a personal device can be just as enjoyable. Ultimately, the most important thing is to enjoy the film in a way that suits your preferences and enhances your overall
viewing experience.Submitted by nandinzayae on
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