The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult

population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
adults
who were overweight in four different countries (
Japan
,
Finland
,
Australia
, and the
USA
) in 1980, 1990, and 2000.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the lowest percentage of
adults
who were overweight recorded in
Japan
and the
USA
recorded the highest proportion of overweight
adults
population among the four countries in the given years.
Furthermore
, the number of
adults
who were overweight grew gradually. The
figure
for
Japan
was less than 5%, which was the lowest percentage among the four countries, and the rate for
Finland
and
Australia
was less than 10% in 1980. After ten years,
Japan
had almost the same rate as before, and the figures for
Finland
and
Australia
showed a slight increase. In the case of the
USA
, the
figure
increased to about 25%. After decades,
Australia
's
figure
rose significantly compared to
Japan
and
Finland
. Those figures recorded over 20%, 10%, and less than 5%, respectively. The
figure
for the
USA
increased gradually to over 30%.
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