The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
adults
who were overweight in four different countries ( Japan
, Finland
, Australia
, and the USA
) in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Overall
, it is clearly seen that the lowest percentage of adults
who were overweight recorded in Japan
and the USA
recorded the highest proportion of overweight adults
population among the four countries in the given years. Furthermore
, the number of adults
who were overweight grew gradually.
The figure
for Japan
was less than 5%, which was the lowest percentage among the four countries, and the rate for Finland
and Australia
was less than 10% in 1980. After ten years, Japan
had almost the same rate as before, and the figures for Finland
and Australia
showed a slight increase. In the case of the USA
, the figure
increased to about 25%.
After decades, Australia
's figure
rose significantly compared to Japan
and Finland
. Those figures recorded over 20%, 10%, and less than 5%, respectively. The figure
for the USA
increased gradually to over 30%.Submitted by heoeunsae on
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