The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.
The chart illustrates the proportion of
adults
who were overweight in four different countries ( Use synonyms
Japan
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Finland
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Australia
, and the Use synonyms
USA
) in 1980, 1990, and 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the lowest percentage of Linking Words
adults
who were overweight recorded in Use synonyms
Japan
and the Use synonyms
USA
recorded the highest proportion of overweight Use synonyms
adults
population among the four countries in the given years. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the number of Linking Words
adults
who were overweight grew gradually.
The Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
Japan
was less than 5%, which was the lowest percentage among the four countries, and the rate for Use synonyms
Finland
and Use synonyms
Australia
was less than 10% in 1980. After ten years, Use synonyms
Japan
had almost the same rate as before, and the figures for Use synonyms
Finland
and Use synonyms
Australia
showed a slight increase. In the case of the Use synonyms
USA
, the Use synonyms
figure
increased to about 25%.
After decades, Use synonyms
Australia
's Use synonyms
figure
rose significantly compared to Use synonyms
Japan
and Use synonyms
Finland
. Those figures recorded over 20%, 10%, and less than 5%, respectively. The Use synonyms
figure
for the Use synonyms
USA
increased gradually to over 30%.Use synonyms
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