Many athletes use performance-enhancing drugs to do better in sports events, and gain the benefits of making money. Do the advantages outweigh the negative impact?

Using performance-enhancing medicines

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a variety of

athletes

reach the top in

sports

competition

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and achieve the goal of making money.

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it will

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victory.

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in my personal perspective, acknowledging that there are pros of using performance-enhancing medicines

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does not overshadow its cons. On the one hand, preparing for good physical health and a strong mind plays a vital role in

sports

, particularly before the round.

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the development of the pharmaceutical industry, performance-enhancing drugs help

athletes

have a great chance to challenge their

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bodies

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and be more confident when participating in

the

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competition

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. Having the perfect performance and the admiration from the audience is one of the most proud things of competitors.

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, a number of sportsmen had become symbols for the young generation of

sports

and other people after winning with strong bodies throughout the

competition

.

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, the nature of

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events is going to change in comparison to previous

competition

(without the presence of performance-enhancing). They have become places for fame and money when

athletes

tend to abuse medicine for economic benefits.

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is unfair for the non-user and the champion turns into trivial and undeserving. As a practical example, an athlete was deprived

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right to compete when discovered

having

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banned drugs on her body. After some unfortunate incidents, the organizing committee already issued a number of prohibitions in

sports

competition

laws. To draw the conclusion, performance-enhancing drugs are beneficial in terms of increasing physical strength but the negative impact of usage outweighs because of its economic purpose. I believe that medicine should be banned to be fair for all

athletes

and

sports

can recover their true meaning.