The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the number of jobless in the UK
,
and its rates in Europe and Japan between 1993 and 2007.
In general, both Remove the comma
apply
line
of EU and Change to a plural noun
lines
UK’s
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UK
line
had a dramatic downward trend; Fix the agreement mistake
lines
however
, the rest of Japan rose significantly. Moreover
, the EU had the highest percentage among the three countries during these years.
From 1993 to 1997, the EU had a rapid growth (from about 9 percent
to nearly 12 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
). After that, the level of it was a considerable decline from approximately 12 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
(in 1997) to about 8 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
(in 2003) . Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
, it rose slightly in 2005,
and went down to under 8 per cent in 2007.
The next one was the UK which had a downward trend until 2001. In 1993, there were 11 Remove the comma
apply
percent
of jobless in the UK but it reduced remarkably to 5 percent
after 8 years (in 2001). It remained unchanged until the period between 2005 and 2007, there
was a minimal upward to 6 Rephrase
when there
percent
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