The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
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The chart illustrates the ownership of computers from 2002 to 2010 and the related education level of owners.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the tendency of people who have a computer is on the rise. Meanwhile, the amount of computers increases with the degree level. Over 55% of individuals had computers in 2002 and gradually increased to over 70% in 2010 which was the highest point at the time. In 2009, the percentage of someone who had a postgraduate qualification was the highest at 70%,
in contrast
, someone who did not have a high school diploma only was the lowest at 15%.
Moreover
, after eight years, the rate of individuals who have no high school diploma rises to 40%. When it comes to high school graduated persons, it grew by 30%, from around 35% to 65%, and other degrees are
also
over 50%, especially the level of postgraduate, which reaches a peak at 90%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • population demographics
  • educational attainment
  • disparities
  • technological advancement
  • digital divide
  • market penetration
  • socio-economic factors
  • predictive insights
  • statistical significance
  • longitudinal study
  • accessibility
  • affordability
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