Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In today’s world, individuals are encouraged to pursue their passion. Many people argue that pupils should be allowed to choose their
subjects
based on their interests
while
few think that all the
students
should
study
the same courses. Should they be allowed to choose their own courses or should the schools consider making them read the same
subjects
? I believe that
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should have the liberty to choose their
subjects
based on their passion.
Firstly
, there are educational institutions which
allows
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and
encourages
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their
students
to select their electives.All
the
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individuals have different talents and not all
the
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students
is
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are
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talented in one
field
of
study
.
For example
, few pupils are immensely talented in
technologies
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and computers
while
others are talented in
medical
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field
.
This
allows the
students
to explore different fields
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young
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age and gives them an opportunity to decide their future during their school days.
On the other hand
, few teachers and parents think that all
the
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students
should have the same courses so that they can have
strong
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foundation and basics
that
is
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are
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required to excel in the outside world.
This
helps the individuals to have basic knowledge about all fields of
study
.
For instance
, there are several people who explore their
interested
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field
of
study
and do not succeed in that
field
. In
this
case, the foundation and basic knowledge of all the
subjects
will give them an advantage to quickly jump to a different industry to survive and earn money.
Thus
, some schools make their
students
to
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study
same
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subjects
during their teenage years.
To sum up
,
although
some people are of the opinion that
students
should have the same
subjects
, I believe that allowing
students
to choose their own
subjects
will make them grow in their career and learn to make decisions in life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning experience
  • motivation
  • enthusiasm
  • strengths and weaknesses
  • skill development
  • future careers
  • creativity
  • innovation
  • standardized curriculum
  • foundational knowledge
  • equal opportunities
  • well-rounded development
  • over-specialization
  • broad-based education
  • career options
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