Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today’s world, individuals are encouraged to pursue their passion. Many people argue that pupils should be allowed to choose their
subjects
based on their interests Use synonyms
while
few think that all the Linking Words
students
should Use synonyms
study
the same courses. Should they be allowed to choose their own courses or should the schools consider making them read the same Use synonyms
subjects
? I believe that Use synonyms
tutee’s
should have the liberty to choose their Change noun form
tutors
subjects
based on their passion.
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Firstly
, there are educational institutions which Linking Words
allows
and Change the verb form
allow
encourages
their Correct subject-verb agreement
encourage
students
to select their electives.All Use synonyms
the
individuals have different talents and not all Correct article usage
apply
the
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apply
students
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is
talented in one Change the verb form
are
field
of Use synonyms
study
. Use synonyms
For example
, few pupils are immensely talented in Linking Words
technologies
and computers Fix the agreement mistake
technology
while
others are talented in Linking Words
medical
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the medical
field
. Use synonyms
This
allows the Linking Words
students
to explore different fields Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
at
young
age and gives them an opportunity to decide their future during their school days.
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a young
On the other hand
, few teachers and parents think that all Linking Words
the
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apply
students
should have the same courses so that they can have Use synonyms
strong
foundation and basics Correct article usage
a strong
that
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is
required to excel in the outside world. Change the verb form
are
This
helps the individuals to have basic knowledge about all fields of Linking Words
study
. Use synonyms
For instance
, there are several people who explore their Linking Words
interested
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apply
field
of Use synonyms
study
and do not succeed in that Use synonyms
field
. In Use synonyms
this
case, the foundation and basic knowledge of all the Linking Words
subjects
will give them an advantage to quickly jump to a different industry to survive and earn money.Use synonyms
Thus
, some schools make their Linking Words
students
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to
Change the verb form
apply
study
Use synonyms
same
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the same
subjects
during their teenage years.
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To sum up
, Linking Words
although
some people are of the opinion that Linking Words
students
should have the same Use synonyms
subjects
, I believe that allowing Use synonyms
students
to choose their own Use synonyms
subjects
will make them grow in their career and learn to make decisions in life.Use synonyms
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