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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee amd bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five different European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee amd bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five different European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate data about
sales
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 of
Fairtrade labelled
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coffee
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 and
bananas
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 over the 5-year period in five European countries.
Overall
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, Switzerland and The United Kingdom were both high-ranked in
two
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 tables. And the
sales
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 of
bananas
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 in 2004 Switzerland
was
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were
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 the highest
sale
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from
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among
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 others.
First,
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the earnings from
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sale
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the sale
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 of
Coffee
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was
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were
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 ten times as popular as the
sale
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 of
bananas
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 in 1999. In the
last
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 year of the question the
sale
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 of
bananas
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 rapidly increased from the first year of the question. In Sweden and
Belgium
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Belgium,
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 there were the lowest
sales
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 of both
coffee
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 and
banana
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bananas
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 in the period in question.
Sum
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The sum
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 of
sales
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of banana
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banana
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bananas
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 in
two
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the two
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 periods was
remarkable
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remarkably
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 higher than
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the sale
a sale
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sale
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sales
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 of
coffee
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.
Sweden
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In Sweden
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 and Denmark the
sales
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 of
banana
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bananas
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 decreased over the half of decade period. There are three
sales
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 which are a little bit of a million
of
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euros. And there were two
sales
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 which
are
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were
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 significantly big, over 20
millions
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million
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of
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euros.
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