The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.

The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.
The line graph gives information about how many people came yearly to
Australia
from foreign countries between 1975 and 2005
while
the table indicates data related to the
number
of visitors. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is obvious that the
number
of visits jumped abruptly during the given period.
In addition
, the greatest rise was witnessed in Japan, increasing by about a fourth. The line graph shows that ten
million
overseas residents visited
Australia
at the beginning of the period.
This
figure soared to 15 and approximately 24
million
, in 1985 and 1995 respectively. In 2005, the
number
of visits reached a peak of over 30
million
. The table shows that the
number
of inhabitants from six various countries who came to
Australia
increased between 1975 and 2005. In South Korea and Japan, many people left their hometown in 2005, 9.1 and 12.0
million
respectively. During the period, the citizens of China, the USA, Europe and Britain tended to visit
Australia
.
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