The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee

and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate
sales
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of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries, namely the
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden.
Overall
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, the
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of Switzerland were the highest amount of
euros
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between 1999 and 2004, which was more than about ten
UK
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sales
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for bananas. In the sale of coffee, selling
of
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in
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the
UK
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increased sharply, which was the greatest rise from 1999 to 2004.
It is clear that
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all five European countries'
sales
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grew gradually,
however
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, especially,
UK
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trade rose sharply from 1.5 to 20
million
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euros
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.
Sales
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of Denmark and Sweden increased slightly by 0.2
million
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euros
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dramatically 15 to 47
million
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euros
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in fair trade-labelled bananas in 1999 and 2004.
Lastly
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, the
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of
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in
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Belgium and the
UK
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, apply rose by 4.5
million
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and 3.4
million
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respectively.
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unlike any other, Sweden and Denmark decreased by 0.8
million
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and 1.1
million
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respectively.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, uk, euros, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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