The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The plan illustrates the

changes

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in the village of

Reymouth

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Weymouth

were

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that were

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made

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from

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1995 until the present.

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, a lot of buildings were added, and the one before was replaced or demolished. The most outstanding is that the Farmland and the forest park were replaced by a Golf

area

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and just under

this

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, a new Tennis

area

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Wrong verb form

was

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added. The Hotel has stood on southest until the present but just with some new

changes

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, like the car park just next to it which is new. Moving forward to the West side, from 1995 until now, the housing

area

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suffered some

changes

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as well, more houses have been added, and

also

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the road now continues to the West, compared with the past, where in 1995 the road was closed. The bottom of the map

also

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suffered

changes

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, all the shop areas

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apply

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were transformed into a restaurant

area

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, the fish Market was removed and now

instead

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of that, new apartments have been added,

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and

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the Fishing port was demolished as well. The only building which has not suffered

changes

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is the cafe, below the Hotel.

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Mar 21, 2024

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

development
village
Ryemouth
1995
present
houses
small school
residential areas
amenities
population
increased
growth
expansion

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