The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The plan illustrates the
changes
in the village of
Reymouth
Correct your spelling
Weymouth
were
Correct pronoun usage
that were
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made
in
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from
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1995 until the present.
Overall
, a lot of buildings were added, and the one before was replaced or demolished. The most outstanding is that the Farmland and the forest park were replaced by a Golf
area
and just under
this
, a new Tennis
area
is
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was
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added. The Hotel has stood on southest until the present but just with some new
changes
, like the car park just next to it which is new. Moving forward to the West side, from 1995 until now, the housing
area
suffered some
changes
as well, more houses have been added, and
also
the road now continues to the West, compared with the past, where in 1995 the road was closed. The bottom of the map
also
suffered
changes
, all the shop areas
,
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were transformed into a restaurant
area
, the fish Market was removed and now
instead
of that, new apartments have been added,
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and
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the Fishing port was demolished as well. The only building which has not suffered
changes
is the cafe, below the Hotel.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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