The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The plan illustrates the the Fishing port was demolished as well. The only building which has not suffered
changes
in the village of Reymouth
Correct your spelling
Weymouth
were
made Correct pronoun usage
that were
in
1995 until the present. Change preposition
from
Overall
, a lot of buildings were added, and the one before was replaced or demolished.
The most outstanding is that the Farmland and the forest park were replaced by a Golf area
and just under this
, a new Tennis area
is
added. The Hotel has stood on southest until the present but just with some new Wrong verb form
was
changes
, like the car park just next to it which is new. Moving forward to the West side, from 1995 until now, the housing area
suffered some changes
as well, more houses have been added, and also
the road now continues to the West, compared with the past, where in 1995 the road was closed.
The bottom of the map also
suffered changes
, all the shop areas,
were transformed into a restaurant Remove the comma
apply
area
, the fish Market was removed and now instead
of that, new apartments have been added,Correct word choice
and
changes
is the cafe, below the Hotel.Submitted by atomoiaga46 on
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