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The graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries, from 2000 to 2012

The graph below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in five European countries, from 2000 to 2012
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The given line graph illustrates data about how many women there are in parliaments in five parts of the world,namely Belgium,
Germany
,İtaly,
UK
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the UK
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 and Spain between 2000 and 2012.
Overall
,what stands out from the graph is that
Although
 the number of females in high positions in
Germany
 ranked first
initally
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initially
,it was outnumbered towards the middle of the period. Looking into detail,there
was
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were
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 32 female members in parliaments in
Germany
 in 2000 and it fluctuated around 35 during
a
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the
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 whole period.Figures for Belgium and Spain showed similar patterns. the former stood at 27 in 2000 and it outstripped by figure for
germany
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Germany
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 towards the middle of a
survey.İt
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survey
 fluctuated widely and stood at 37 in 2012.As for the latter, there
was
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 approximately 23 women in high positions in Belgium.İt increased sharply and despite its gradual decline,it
overtakened
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overtaken
figure
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the figure
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 for Spain. When it comes to the UK,the number of females in parliaments in
this
 part of the world stood at 17 and it declined marginally before increasing unexpectedly to just above 20 in 2012.Meanwhile,the figure for İtaly has the least female members in high positions among five countries(about 3 members).İt remained stable for the first three years and increased sharply before decreasing gradually to just above 20
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