The table below shows how the Uk unemployed spent their time last year. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table diagram illustrates
the
how the United Correct article usage
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Kingdom
unemployed time was spent previous year. Change noun form
Kingdom's
Additionally
, the information categorized
into 4 groups which were morning Add a missing verb
was categorized
men
, morning women
, afternoon
men
, afternoon
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and afternoon
women
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that most morning women
do house work
which is Correct your spelling
housework
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the highest
highest
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the highest
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on
in
the table Change preposition
on
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at
by
49% and following that, morning Change preposition
at
women
spent
their time Wrong verb form
spend
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doing
shopping at the second highest Verb problem
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on
in
the table with 26%. For Change preposition
on
men
most Add a comma
men,
men
spent their time looking for a job (22%) in the morning and watching TV (14%) in the afternoon
. The 3 most popular activities for both sexes, in the morning, are job hunting, shopping, and housework. There are some changes in the afternoon
. On one hand, men
preferred watching TV, gardening, and looking for employment. On the other hand
, women
preferred visiting friends or relatives, searching for a job, and doing housework
Some activities like playing sports and staying in bed were reported only by men
in both periods. Women
reported these activities just in the morning.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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