The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart illustrates information about the amount of
visitors
entering a museum in the United Kingdom in two seasons in 2005.
It is noticeable that the highest Use synonyms
visitors
of British Museum was at 12 o'Use synonyms
clock
in the summer Use synonyms
season
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By contrast
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visitors
would not come to the museum after 15 o'Use synonyms
clock
in winter.
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season
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
significantly skyrocketed between 0 o'Use synonyms
clock
to 11 o'Use synonyms
clock
reaching 1300 Use synonyms
visitors
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Then
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
slowly rose to 1500 Use synonyms
visitors
which increased the growth of 200 persons. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
dropped time by time which fell from 1300 Use synonyms
visitors
to 800 Use synonyms
visitors
from 11 o'Use synonyms
clock
to 16 o'Use synonyms
clock
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
entering sharply decreased from 800 to 0 Use synonyms
visitors
, respectively during 2 hours.
In the winter Use synonyms
season
, the amount of Use synonyms
visitors
was lower than summer Use synonyms
season
which was highest at 12 o'Use synonyms
clock
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
entering during periods 0 to 10 which significantly increased was 400 Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
As well as
1 hour after that the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
was steady for one hour. After that, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
achieved 600 Use synonyms
visitors
in one hour from 11 to 12. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
significantly declined to 600 Use synonyms
visitors
. After that, the visitor was steady until 18 o'Use synonyms
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