The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates to us the number of people who passed their driving test over the stage of twenty years. First of all, in accordance with the figure, the amount of
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who go through the driving test is more each age, and reaches a peak in the season 2000, in the meantime, the men got to the lowest point in the stage 1980.
Subsequently
, it provides us with a different growth, men provided a rise since 1980 and finished in 2000 were stayed constant but underneath
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,
whereas
women started with a slight rise until 2000 which sharply increased but not long-lasting in the following year.
To conclude
, the driving test in Asia has better results and it's easier for
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rather than men over the time of forty years because it gives the lowest number at each age, even when they reach a peak
this
is lower than women ever course.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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