Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public heath, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

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prohibition of tobacco commodities.

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correlation between smoking and respiratory

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sticks.

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where they should not utilize them

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or herb plants

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unconvincing in the near future.