The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the quantity of four different items that were recycled between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
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while
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some materials
experience
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fluctuation in recycling
rate
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rates
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, the period witnessed an upward trend
of
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in
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the recycling rates of the four materials. 
Recycling
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rate of paper
and
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apply
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cardboard, and Glass
container
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containers
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started at almost 65% in 1982. After that, the rate of paper and cardboard rose slightly to 70% in 1986.
Then
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return
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to its earlier number before
experienced
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a sharp rise from 1990 to 1994, with a rise from almost 65% to approximately 80%. From 1994 to 2010, it
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experienced a steady decline.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Recycled
  • Materials
  • Trends
  • Significant
  • Stability
  • Peak periods
  • Declines
  • Plateaus
  • Growth rates
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Fluctuations
  • Notable
  • Paraphrase
  • Summarize
  • Analyze
  • Comparison
  • Introduction
  • Overview
  • Conclusion
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