The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the quantity of four different items that were recycled between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
, while
some materials experience
fluctuation in recycling Replace the word
experienced
rate
, the period witnessed an upward trend Fix the agreement mistake
rates
of
the recycling rates of the four materials.
Change preposition
in
Recycling
rate of paper Add an article
The recycling
and
cardboard, and Glass Correct word choice
apply
container
started at almost 65% in 1982. After that, the rate of paper and cardboard rose slightly to 70% in 1986. Fix the agreement mistake
containers
Then
, return
to its earlier number before Wrong verb form
returned
experienced
a sharp rise from 1990 to 1994, with a rise from almost 65% to approximately 80%. From 1994 to 2010, it Wrong verb form
experiencing
then
experienced a steady decline.Submitted by NA
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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