The pie charts give information about why people in Great Britain had to visit O museums in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The information collated clearly shows that the majority of people visited museums in the UK to gain knowledge and learn and
this
did not fluctuate much between the two years as it was only a one percent
difference.
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museums
special exhibits Change to a genitive case
museum's
museums'
however
, did have a a
bigger variation in percentages as 2010 was seemingly more popular to visitors given the six Remove the redundancy
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percent
rise in attendees, Change the spelling
per cent
whereas
filling travel schedules was
more important in the year 2000 Change the verb form
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that
2010 Correct word choice
than
due to
the drop in figures of fifteen percent
, which is quite a large difference but obviously peoples travel plans changed significantly.
Surprisingly, spending time with friends and family does not appear to be very high on Change the spelling
per cent
peoples
priorities as the figures shown are in the lower teens so Change noun form
people's
this
time clearly isn't reported as important as learning.
I was personally unaware the
you could purchase art from a museum so I am not surprised at the low figure here.
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that
To conclude
, learning and gaining knowledge is seen as more important than spending time with friends and family, filling travel schedules or attending special exhibits, which is sad as museums are incredible places to visit, free and need the support to keep running but this
pie chart shows how peoples outlooks have changed in ten years.Submitted by roshnijuneja19182 on
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