The pie charts give information about why people in Great Britain had to visit O museums in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts give information about why people in Great Britain had to visit O museums in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The information collated clearly shows that the majority of people visited museums in the UK to gain knowledge and learn and

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did not fluctuate much between the two years as it was only a one

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difference. The

museums

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special exhibits

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, did have a

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bigger variation in percentages as 2010 was seemingly more popular to visitors given the six

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rise in attendees,

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filling travel schedules

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more important in the year 2000

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2010

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the drop in figures of fifteen

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, which is quite a large difference but obviously peoples travel plans changed significantly. Surprisingly, spending time with friends and family does not appear to be very high on

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priorities as the figures shown are in the lower teens so

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time clearly isn't reported as important as learning. I was personally unaware

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you could purchase art from a museum so I am not surprised at the low figure here.

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, learning and gaining knowledge is seen as more important than spending time with friends and family, filling travel schedules or attending special exhibits, which is sad as museums are incredible places to visit, free and need the support to keep running but

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pie chart shows how peoples outlooks have changed in ten years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

215 words

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