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The diagram illustrates the outcomes after getting
public
point of view of consumption habits of tea and Add an article
the public
a public
coffee
and also
purchasing in five cities in Australia.
Overall
, Most people preferred buying fresh coffee
and least went to cafe
for Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
coffee
or tea in five Australian countries.
People bought
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who bought
the
fresh Correct article usage
apply
coffee
in last
4 weeks Correct article usage
the last
takes
the first spot in Correct subject-verb agreement
take
diagram
with Add an article
the diagram
a diagram
the
proportion of about 64% in Melbourne and second place in Hobart (63%) and third position in Sydney (61%).
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a
On the other hand
, who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
counsume
instant Correct your spelling
consume
consumed
coffee
were
relatively steady for every country and Change the verb form
was
hobart
takes the first spot with the number Change the capitalization
Hobart
of
54% and least for Sydney Change preposition
apply
for
46%. People Change preposition
with
went
to Correct pronoun usage
who went
cafe
is most least in Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
graph
and highest for Sydney with Correct article usage
the graph
ratio
of 44%.Add an article
a ratio
the ratio
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