It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

It is predicted that after

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years the number of aged individuals in some nations

would

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exceed the total of teenagers living in those nations. I believe

that is

a negative trend

beacuse

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because

it adds

extra

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burden to

government

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the government

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and there would be no

economical

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growth in these countries.

To begin

with, in many states

the

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health care is handled by the government.

Generally

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people

are

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often

gets

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sick if they are getting old.

Therefore

, the count of

elder

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the elder

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population is directly

propotional

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proportional

to the

amout

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amount

of funds

spend

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by the states.

Additionally

, the workers

demands

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high wages for moving to these cities.

For example

,

few

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cities in Canada are occupied

with

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aged

couple

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,

Canada

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is investing a lot of funds to build care houses in these areas.

Dispite

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Despite

of funds the workers are not willing to relocate to

these kind

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this kind

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of areas

beacuse

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because

of poor development.

Furthermore

,

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a nations

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nations

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economy depends on the average revenue of the

citizines

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citizens

. Suppose there are only

few

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a few

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teenagers in a city which leads to

work force

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a workforce

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imbalance. The

numbers

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number

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of manforce jobs in the market would rise and finding perfect workers for these tasks would become tough.

Thus

,

this

scenario impacts the GDP of the country.

For example

, Canada needs more workforce than the current population inside the country. So it accepts

higher

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a higher

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number of

temperory

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temporary

residents to balance the economy. In conclusion,

to

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in

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my way of thinking if the count of retired persons

are

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higher than the count of

current

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the current

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generation is not good for

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the govement

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govement

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government

movement

and countries GDP.