The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart given provides information about the percentages of causes that make
land
barren. The table illustrates how three different areas were affected by these causes in the 1990s.
Overall
, it is clear that
over–grazing
is the biggest reason for being infertile, Correct your spelling
overgrazing
while
in Europe land
degradation is totally higher than other degradation rates.
Moving to a detailed analysis, the figure for over-grazing accounted for almost one–third of the total, with over-cultivation representing 28%. In terms of the indicator of deforestation
and others, deforestation
indicated 30%, while
others were just under one-tenth.
Turning to the table, in North America, the proportion of land
degraded was the lowest at 5%, with deforestation
, over-cultivation, and over-grazing constituting 0.2%, 3.3%, and 1.5% respectively. In comparison, in Europe, the most considerable share of land
was degraded at just over one-fifth, and the corresponding figures for Europe were responsible for 9.8%, 7.7%, and 5.5% of the total in turn. With regard to the rates for Oceania, that for deforestation
was 1.7%, with over-grazing forming 11.3% of all, totaling
13%. Change the spelling
totalling
However
, there is no land
degradation that is
caused by over-cutivation
.Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
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