The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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about
how many Change preposition
between
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
would be and when would the sun rise and set between Use synonyms
London
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Sydney
in December 2018.
The maximum Use synonyms
temperature
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during
December 28th to 30th in Change preposition
from
London
was 13 Use synonyms
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
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while
that was 31 Linking Words
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
in Use synonyms
Sydney
. The minimum Use synonyms
temperature
in Use synonyms
Sydney
(19 Use synonyms
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
) was over 6 times than that in Use synonyms
London
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as
3 Change preposition
at
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
, which was even higher than Use synonyms
top
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the top
temperature
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London
, too. The average Use synonyms
temperature
in Use synonyms
London
was less than 10 Use synonyms
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degree
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degrees
Celsium
but Correct your spelling
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exceeding
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exceeded
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degree
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degrees
Celsius
in Use synonyms
Sydney
.
Sunrise occurred about 3 hours later in Use synonyms
London
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Sydney
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in Sydney
in
these 3 days in December 2018. As for sunset was at around 4 PM in Change preposition
on
London
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while
4 hours later in Linking Words
Sydney
at around 8 PM. Use synonyms
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, the duration of daylight Linking Words
of
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in
Sydney
was Use synonyms
15hour
per day, which was Correct your spelling
15 hours
near
2 times more in Change the word
nearly
London
with 8 Use synonyms
hour
each day.
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hours
Sydney
was warmer and had more hours of daylight than Use synonyms
London
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