The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the difference
about
how many Change preposition
between
degree
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degrees
Celsius
would be and when would the sun rise and set between London
and Sydney
in December 2018.
The maximum temperature
during
December 28th to 30th in Change preposition
from
London
was 13 degree
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degrees
Celsius
while
that was 31 degree
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degrees
Celsius
in Sydney
. The minimum temperature
in Sydney
(19 degree
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degrees
Celsius
) was over 6 times than that in London
as
3 Change preposition
at
degree
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degrees
Celsius
, which was even higher than top
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the top
temperature
in London
, too. The average temperature
in London
was less than 10 degree
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degrees
Celsium
but Correct your spelling
Celsius
exceeding
20 Wrong verb form
exceeded
degree
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degrees
Celsius
in Sydney
.
Sunrise occurred about 3 hours later in London
(about 8 AM) than Sydney
(5:45AM) Change preposition
in Sydney
in
these 3 days in December 2018. As for sunset was at around 4 PM in Change preposition
on
London
while
4 hours later in Sydney
at around 8 PM. As a result
, the duration of daylight of
Change preposition
in
Sydney
was 15hour
per day, which was Correct your spelling
15 hours
near
2 times more in Change the word
nearly
London
with 8 hour
each day.
In summary, Change to a plural noun
hours
Sydney
was warmer and had more hours of daylight than London
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