The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
The tables compare How much
fairtrade
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fair trade
coffee
and bananas were sold in 1999 and 2004, in five
nations of Europe.
As for coffee
, the first table shows low-level coffee
sales
increasing in all five
countries
. The UK was the most salient country with 1.5 million
in 1999 and its
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it
jump
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jumped
million
. Denmark
, accounting for 1.8 million
in 1999, doubled exactly in 2004. In two
places Correct article usage
the two
sales
increased by the same small amount: 1.8-2 million
in Denmark
and 0.8-1 million
in Sweden
. Meanwhile, in Belgium, there was an increase, from 0.8-1 million
.
In the second table, although
the sales
of bananas increased in Switzerland, UK, and Belgium, they went down in two other countries
(Sweden
and Denmark
). Swiss sales
figures jumped from 15-47 million
euros
during these five
years, while
in the UK and Belgium sales
only grew from 1-5.5 and 0.6-4 million
respectively. However
, Sweden
and Denmark
showed a different pattern, with falls in banana sales
from 1.8-1 and 2-0.9 million
euros
.
Comparing the two tables, the coffee
sales
ranged from 0.8-3 million
euros
in these five
countries
, while
the range of banana sales
figures was from 0.6 to 2 million
euros
. By 2004, sales
figures for both products had mounted in most countries
, except for Sweden
and Denmark
which recorded drops in banana sales
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