The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The given diagram illustrates the all process of making soft cheese briefly. The main five steps of production are mixing, cooling, fermentation, evaporation, and cooling.
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The given diagram illustrates the
process
of producing soft Use synonyms
cheese
and there are five stages of Use synonyms
this
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process
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such
as production, mixing, cooling, fermentation, evaporation and cooling.
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Overall
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it is clear that
commences with the mixing and finishes with the cooling.
In detail, the first step of making the Linking Words
cheese
is mixing water and milk and these two ingredients are in a liquid form. Use synonyms
Thereafter
, cooling is the second step of Linking Words
this
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process
and takes 2 hours to cool Use synonyms
along with
the five-degree Linking Words
Celsius
. After that, salt is added to a liquid form before fermentation as well and it takes two hours at thirty-five degrees Use synonyms
Celsius
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then
thin liquid becomes a thick liquid in Linking Words
this
step.and Linking Words
this
is a heating Linking Words
process
.
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Furthermore
, evaporation is the third stage Linking Words
process
it is a heat Use synonyms
process
of a hundred degrees Use synonyms
Celsius
and takes eight hours to stem and it contains a thick layer of all the ingredients. The final Use synonyms
process
is cooling, Use synonyms
it
takes Correct pronoun usage
which
eight-hour
by five degrees Correct your spelling
eight hours
Celsius
and the first layer of soft Use synonyms
cheese
is produced by a filter Use synonyms
then
the bottom of the cooling vessel has wastewater and the filter is used to remove the water from the Linking Words
cheese
.Use synonyms
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