The map below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the current
apearance
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appearance
of the southwest airport and
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after the redevelopment plan in the next year. The airport departures have only one exit on the left
side
of the building, with a check-in opposite the cafe which both of them are adjacent to the security passport control
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to make sure the
luggages
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luggage
pieces of luggage
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carried by passengers
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safe. On the right
side
, there are rooms for arrivals with passport control customs. A walkway is on the left
side
surrounded by 8 gates. After the redevelopment, an exit at the departures and an entrance at the arrivals will be added respectively.
Moreover
, the check-in and cafe will change their locations but still in opposite sites,
while
a bag drop is going to conquer the check-in's original place. Some shops will be built behind the security passport control. As for the
side
of arrivals, a coffee shop, an ATM and a car hire will be constructed. The
walk way
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is going to move to the middle of the road and ten gates will be added around a Y-shape newly
bulit
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built
land.
Overall
, the southwest airport is going to be more functional and convenient for travellers to use after the reconstruction of some infrastructure and facilities in the next year.
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