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Nowadays, learners` focus to the lesson in the classrooms has decreased. On my standpoint, both some types of online games on phones and friends who are studying with them are interrupting, and there may be some key solutions which are affective to delay these problems.

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Nowadays, learners` focus
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 the lesson in the classrooms has decreased.
On
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 my standpoint, both some types of online games on
phones
 and friends who are studying with them are interrupting, and there may be some key solutions which are
affective
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to delay
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 these problems. On the
one
 hand, there are some reasons to increase the number of
people
 who
are
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 not
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 lessons in the schools.
To begin
 with
such
 reasons, I believe that all
people
 have their private
phones
 to utilize or communicate with their parents or friends, but nowadays, many
people
 tend to play games on their
phones
.
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 many
people
 are in a lesson, they always try to play games.
In addition
, some
people
 think that lessons in their schools are very boring, and they always try to make lessons very interesting with classmates in their classes.
On the other hand
,
in
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 my perspective, there are some possible solutions
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this
 problem.
Firstly
, nowadays, in some schools, teachers are trying to
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the
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phones
 in classes.
Secondly
, teachers should set
one-place
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 system for all
people
 in which system
one
 table should
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 allocated
for
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per student. In
this
 strict system, there is
not
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 density from
one
 student to another
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one
. In conclusion, there are a lot of issues, but they will be solved effectively by the government with some possible solutions.
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