The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates some data regarding different kinds of waste disposed in a territory in two periods of 1960 and 2011. Regarding the first year of record (1960), Paper held the first place at about 25
percent
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and it was closely followed by Textiles.
In addition
, Wood had the
last
position at around 4
percent
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.
Although
Glass, Medal, Plastic and Green waste had almost the same ratio they are kept at middle values. In regard to the second year of record which is 2011, Food exceeded the other
contestant
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but it was followed by Plastic.
Additionally
, Other had the
last
place but it
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not far behind Glass.
Overall
, in comparison to the first year, the ratio of the Other has tripled.
On the other hand
, the ratio of the Plastic and Wood has almost doubled.
Furthermore
, Metal, Glass and Green waste kept their place and they did not change significantly.
Consequently
, a few members kept their places but most of them had graduate increase in their values.
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